01 August, 2016

The curse of a butterfly - #BARathon day #1

Nita is excited to see a beautiful flower bloom in her garden. While she is about to see the flower from nearer, a colorful beautiful butterfly caught her attention. The butterfly looked amazing and unique. Nita wanted to touch it, but before she realized, the damage happened. Her hands brushed the soft wings of butterfly crushing them into pieces. The butterfly fell down.


A soul emerged from the butterfly slowly taking a vicious form before Nita's eyes cursing her immeadiate death.

Before she even realized what happened, two soft hands gripped her throat tight. When she struggled to release those hands with her full strength, breathing heavily, her sleep is disturbed by her daughter’s sad face screaming at her for throwing her down.

Atlast, Nita managed to convince her dear daughter about the nasty dream which was stranger than fiction.

Linking this to BARaThon hosted by Shailaja here.

Until next time,


Ps: Image is from free images of pixabay.


19 comments:

Nabanita said...

Some dreams truly are stranger than fiction 😊 Beautiful take on the prompt..

tulika singh said...

Uff this was scary. And it gets scarier when a pretty thing like a butterfly changes into something sinister.

Sid @ iwrotethose.com said...

Dreams very truly stranger than fiction. just imagine if it had become a reality.....woah!

Rekha said...

Nightmarish dreams really make you feel suffocated. Wonderful take on the prompt.

Andapo Girl said...

What a dream!! ... a beautiful things into sudden night... nice take on dreams(:

Vidya Sury said...

That was scary! Poor Nita. Well done! :) Dreams can be so crazy!

Anamika Agnihotri said...

Scary spooky.Nightmares are such.

mahathi ramya A said...

Thanks Nabanita.

mahathi ramya A said...

True Anamika :-)

mahathi ramya A said...

Thanks Vidya

mahathi ramya A said...

Thanks Andapo Girl..

mahathi ramya A said...

Thanks Rekha

mahathi ramya A said...

Nooo Sid, I am afraid, what happens if it becomes true. Like 'EEga' movie in telugu

mahathi ramya A said...

true Tulika, we can't imagine a beautiful butterfly turning sinister, only in dreams it can happen

Vinay Leo R. said...

Oh. Thank God it was a dream. It'd be scary as hell if it came true!

sunaina sharma said...

Some dreams are just awful....and one cannot just wish them away....Liked the narration....

Subha Rajagopal said...

Wow!Almost gave me the creeps! We get such dreams now and then,the ones which erase the thin line between awakening and dreaming

Corinne Rodrigues said...

Thankfully, it was just a dream. I'm presently reading a book called the A to Z of Dreams. Perhaps, I'll find this one there! ;)

Ajay Pai said...

that was a disturbing dream, i must say.

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