25 June, 2018

A wrong move #WriteBravely

Read Part 1 and Part 2 of the story here.
Love is crazy. It makes people go off balance sometimes.

While Krithika is busy preparing question papers for her class and making copies, accidentally met the vibrant and handsome Rajiv who joined as a new teacher in his school. A casual friendship blossomed into love.

Hours became seconds for the lovebirds. The background, financial problems and, family restrictions took back seat. They went ahead and got married. Both were contented and happy till 6 months while Karthika took pride in Rajiv's possessiveness and enjoyed his undivided attention.

Small differences started cropping up whenever Karthika spends more time with her close friends or takes extra classes in school. Rajiv wants her to be dependent on him for every small thing and cannot bear when she manages anything on her own. He used to show his frustration and anger by insulting her/ accusing her of affairs with her male friends. He is the most loving husband only when she is submissive and supports her husband blindly.

Karthika didn't lose hopes on her married life as she believed that she can change her fate.
“Our fate lives within us. You only have to be brave enough to see it.” – Brave

Until next time,

Linking this to Write Tribe Festival of Words. #WTFOW #WriteBravely
This is the third part of the Fiction series written for Write Tribe festival of words.


  1. To be honest I think she is keeping false hopes. A man who wants his wife to be submissive is not one who will change.

  2. Moodiness and tantrums to keep ones partner on tenterhooks is the worst kind of relationship. But let's see what happens in your story.

  3. Not liking the direction in which this is going :(

  4. Such men rarely change but would love to know what happens next. Interesting story.

  5. This relationship is not healthy. Let's hope it improves.

  6. Interested to know how she will change her fate.. Hope will know tomorrow

  7. well to each his own. The heart has its reasons that reason does not understand

  8. It's just the male ego which sometimes do cross borders, I hope it does in this story

  9. Not sure what is going to happen in the life of karthika next but practically this kind of egoistic behaviour never tends to change!


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