Writing this for #BARaThon challenge by Blog-a-rhythm for day#5.
Day 5 prompt - Tiny shoes
Those little shoes..
Were a gift from my dearest uncle
Those pretty pink shoes..
Made me a centre of attraction whenever I wore with my matching pink frock
Those tiny shoes..
I wore them in the nights secretly and felt proud of myself watching in mirror
Those beatiful bright shoes..
I felt very possessive about them and didn't give to anyone even when they didn't fit anymore
Those shining little shoes..
Lost their beauty by drenching in flood water but I couldn't give up still
Those pretty pink shoes..
For whose I couldn't find any replacement yet.
Until next time,
Iam not very good at writing poetry or fiction and this is my feeble attempt for the prompt 😊
Image courtesy: A free image from pixabay.com.
Day 5 prompt - Tiny shoes
Those little shoes..
Were a gift from my dearest uncle
Those pretty pink shoes..
Made me a centre of attraction whenever I wore with my matching pink frock
Those tiny shoes..
I wore them in the nights secretly and felt proud of myself watching in mirror
Those beatiful bright shoes..
I felt very possessive about them and didn't give to anyone even when they didn't fit anymore
Those shining little shoes..
Lost their beauty by drenching in flood water but I couldn't give up still
Those pretty pink shoes..
For whose I couldn't find any replacement yet.
Until next time,
Iam not very good at writing poetry or fiction and this is my feeble attempt for the prompt 😊
Image courtesy: A free image from pixabay.com.
Cute attempt, Ramya :)
ReplyDeleteLoved it!
Thanks Ruchira
DeleteIt's a very good attempt. I don't know much about poetry, but I enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeleteI'm good with poems like this which I can understand. And this was cute.
ReplyDeleteGood one! Liked the essence of cuteness :)
ReplyDeleteSo you love shoes eh Mahathi? :)
ReplyDeleteThat is sweetly written....:)
ReplyDeletewell sweet and child like ..:)
ReplyDeleteSuch a cute and innocent take:)
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